Thursday, April 30, 2015
Thursday, April 23, 2015
Maths
In my maths I got to relational because I know the answer and I can explain the strategy I used and how I completed it. My next step is to complete the maths sheet quicker.

Thursday, April 2, 2015
Self Portrait
I think I am at extended abstract because I can use several elements and I know when and why I use them.
Wednesday, April 1, 2015
Friday, March 27, 2015
Description Writing
Wouldn't it be amazing to just relax on the sofa, scoff chips and fizzy lollies, watching new action movies, not having parents commanding you to do chores every second and being just plain awesome. The movie is now getting to the scary part where a man is chasing a girl down a long ally way. DING DONG. You spy through the window curtains. A tall, dark figure is standing outside the doorway. Its a foggy night so you can just make out the facial features. He's unrecognisable. What do you do?
You could not answer the door. He might get cold outside and probably leave because they don't have a puffa jacket. He could also break in and steal your piggy bank. That wouldn't be good. Or he could be super annoying and keep ringing the doorbell til morning. Yay. That would be heavenly, wouldn't it?!
You could answer the door. The first consequence is simple, so simple that I'm only going to say the sound effect: KAPOW!!! Ouch. He could be a neighbour, or a close friend of your parents. You never know, he could be the prime minister!
You could hide and call your parents. The man might break in while you're on hold, though. You'll definitely get thirsty after eating all those fizzy lollies. You might even get stuck!
The best option is to hide and call your parents. you don't even have to hide, just call your parents. They might clear up a situation, like they were expecting someone but forgot about it and went out. You might get stuck but its better to be stuck then sorry!
You could not answer the door. He might get cold outside and probably leave because they don't have a puffa jacket. He could also break in and steal your piggy bank. That wouldn't be good. Or he could be super annoying and keep ringing the doorbell til morning. Yay. That would be heavenly, wouldn't it?!
You could answer the door. The first consequence is simple, so simple that I'm only going to say the sound effect: KAPOW!!! Ouch. He could be a neighbour, or a close friend of your parents. You never know, he could be the prime minister!
You could hide and call your parents. The man might break in while you're on hold, though. You'll definitely get thirsty after eating all those fizzy lollies. You might even get stuck!
The best option is to hide and call your parents. you don't even have to hide, just call your parents. They might clear up a situation, like they were expecting someone but forgot about it and went out. You might get stuck but its better to be stuck then sorry!
CARE Values:how they are shown at Oaklands school
Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Monday, March 23, 2015
Wonder Narrative
WALT: I can use the features of a narrative text and I know when and why to use them. I can seek and act on feedback.
California Chaos
California Chaos
I hate public places.
And I especially hate airports.
But I adore California and that's the only reason I"m here. Also Christopher and his family are traveling with us. I'm so excited yet I tremble with fear. Everyone gawks at me and whispers rude comments behind their hands about me. Everywhere I go, there's a lull in conversation of those in the room and then a faint scurry of voices gather up as one as I slope away. That thought lingers in my head.
"Were just going to the loo, you guys need to go?", questions Dad with a wink in his eye.
"No daddy, I'm a big boy now, I can go when i want"
"Sure you don't need me to take you?", Dad says with a smug face.
Christopher starts cracking up.
"Okay then . You guys wait here and don't leave to California with out us"
'
Leaning on the wall to the toilets, Christopher and I start chatting about Yoda and how he's so midget, green and ancient yet he can do flips and cartwheels. Christopher attempted to do an impression of him and a cartwheel with light-saber sound effects and nearly crashes into a mother with a pram passing by. He expeditiously skids back to the wall but he missteps and we turn out to be in a big heap of ourselves. For some reason this is humorous to us and we start cracking up! A whole cluster of tourists scramble past, eyeballing us. We leap up somehow from the human knot and briskly dust ourselves off. We are still chuckling though. Suddenly, Christopher falls silent.
Two shadows lurk up behind me.
"The living dead is coming out soon. Such a thriller."
"Yeah its really gruesome. Heard its based on a true story."
"Dude what wrong with you?! That's why its called a story. Don't you know what a narrative is?"
"Wait. Be quite. Yo Pug Face!"
I know he's aiming those words at me.
"Can't ya hear me?!"
"Probably cant hear through those bomby-knockers."
They snicker.
I get a hard shove on my shoulder. It felt like it almost dislocated. He spins me around.
"Whoa, he's worse then i thought!"
"Hopefully you're not getting a passport photo. The photographer would have to wash his eyes out with soap!"
That thought leaves another dent in my heart.
I think for a second. Time to fight fire with fire.
"Then how come you're looking at it?"
"Coz I'm better looking..."
"That's rich", I reply, "because you look like a ruffian piece of scrub of Hitlers mustache in a bomb fire. You better not stay here much longer because I can hear the cops coming with the ambulance because you look and smell like something died. They want to throw you lunatics in to the front line of Russia when the greatest of all wars come. The sky will crash on top of you"
I say the last line calmly for effect.
He looks shell shocked.
They quickly scuttle off horrified.
"Good thing i showed you my argument speech!", Christopher finally says.
I have achieved the extended abstract stage.
I have achieved the extended abstract stage.
Helping out around the school
Merit evidence: helping out around the school.
On Friday last week, the Kauri team had their 'Run, Bike, Run'. As one of the Leaders, we had to run around calling out how long we've got to go for example: "5 minutes to go, guys!". My voice got tired after a while. Rowan and I (as the deputies) had to open the event for 2015. We were very nervous about talking in front of them because Mr Forman hadn't given us the scripts, so we just had to 'wing it'. It turned out really good. No mistakes. After the year 7/8's had already left to go to their games, Rowan and I saw that the teachers had trouble keeping the students behind the cones around the starting line. We decided to go and help them out. It was quite easy, we basically just asked the students to hop behind the cones and moved some bags that were in the way.
On Friday last week, the Kauri team had their 'Run, Bike, Run'. As one of the Leaders, we had to run around calling out how long we've got to go for example: "5 minutes to go, guys!". My voice got tired after a while. Rowan and I (as the deputies) had to open the event for 2015. We were very nervous about talking in front of them because Mr Forman hadn't given us the scripts, so we just had to 'wing it'. It turned out really good. No mistakes. After the year 7/8's had already left to go to their games, Rowan and I saw that the teachers had trouble keeping the students behind the cones around the starting line. We decided to go and help them out. It was quite easy, we basically just asked the students to hop behind the cones and moved some bags that were in the way.
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