Hi guys! Thanks for being awesome friends! If you are Alicia, Emma or Cassie, and if you have spear time, please ring me to play Mathletics please!:):):):):):):)
Plus Sarah and others!!:)
Mia xx
Monday, March 25, 2013
Friday, March 22, 2013
Thursday, March 14, 2013
I wov Mafs!!
I love Mathletics!! I get heaps of points! It's a pity Mrs. Patten took off level 1, 2 and 3!! I'm glad that's the bonus level though!!
Mia xx
Mia xx
Swimming Sports!!
Hi guys! In swimming sports fun house day I came 3rd in freestyle and 2 in backstroke!!:) ( Both of those are lengths!)
Tuesday, March 12, 2013
Wonder Beach
What: WALT use our senses (hearing, smell, touch, taste and sight) to describe our thoughts, experiences and feelings.
So What: I learnt to use describing words in my writing to express what I am writing about, This helps the reader to know what I am talking about and to feel like they are there.
Now What: Next time I need to make my story shorter so the reader doesn't have to read to much and in which case they may build up a fuzzy picture in their mind.
Here is my work:
I gaze at the waves, some small as ants, some taller then man. I listen to the the squawking seagulls and rocks rattling as the the strong current drags them in. I scent fish in the sea and the salty, sweet whiff coming with the waves. I frisk at the sand in between my toes like putting your feet in a tank of worms.
I dab the sea water off my face. It was wonderful.
I dab the sea water off my face. It was wonderful.
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