Monday, March 25, 2013

Read this if your my friend!

Hi guys! Thanks for being awesome friends! If you are Alicia, Emma or Cassie, and if you have spear time, please ring me to play Mathletics please!:):):):):):):)

Plus Sarah and others!!:)

Mia xx

Friday, March 22, 2013

My sheet

This is my work sheet-thingy. 
Hope you like it!!:)

Thursday, March 14, 2013

I wov Mafs!!

I love Mathletics!! I get heaps of points! It's a pity Mrs. Patten took off level 1, 2 and 3!! I'm glad that's the bonus level though!!

Mia xx

Swimming Sports!!

Hi guys! In swimming sports fun house day I came 3rd in freestyle and 2 in backstroke!!:) ( Both of those are lengths!)

Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Wonder Beach

What:  WALT use our senses (hearing, smell, touch, taste and sight) to describe our thoughts, experiences and feelings.

So What:  I learnt to use describing words in my writing to express what I am writing about,  This helps the reader to know what I am talking about and to feel like they are there.  

Now What:    Next time I need to make my story shorter so the reader doesn't have to read to much and in which case they may build up a fuzzy picture in their mind.

Here is my work:

I gaze at the waves, some small as ants, some taller then man. I listen to the the squawking seagulls and rocks rattling as the the strong current drags them in. I scent fish in the sea and the salty, sweet whiff coming with the waves. I frisk at the sand in between my toes like putting your feet in a tank of worms.
I dab the sea water off my face. It was wonderful.